The 2016 election was one of the most controversial elections
in probably the United States history. It was a full year of negative political
ads and several articles that were made up about both candidates, which made it
difficult for some people to tell what was real or fake news. Samantha
Subramanian focuses on Veles, an 18-year-old boy from the Balkan nation that
made thousands of dollars through creating fake news. This story within itself
is pretty interesting, but since most people in the United States saw several
of these fake news articles everyday shared through Facebook or tweeted it was
able to resonate with the audience. That is what was able to give this piece a
human element because it was about something we all know about and it gave insight
to Veles life. That is similar to the documentary that we watched in class,
when they were able to talk to internet trolls. I would say this is a more
effective piece then that one because it gave us more information on the guy,
so that we could see why he decided start writing these articles. As most
people expected it was for money, but it was a little bit more then that. He
lived in an underdeveloped neighborhood with limited opportunities and when he
got the chance to get some of the material things that he otherwise would not
be able to afford he took it. This appeals to the audience’s emotions or
pathos, so that they can feel a little bit of sympathy for him. Overall that
made this an entertaining piece that I thoroughly enjoyed, along with I am sure
the majority of the class simply due to how relatable it was. Most people watch
shows or read books because they can relate to a character or the story. In
this case, it was a story that we were and are all too familiar with. Even
though the election is over just like the article said there are still
thousands or maybe even millions of fake news stories that we could find on the
internet.
Thursday, March 30, 2017
Monday, March 27, 2017
iGod analysis
In an age where almost everyone around the world has some
sort of technology in their household whether it is a phone or laptop, most
people seem to question how far it will be able to advance. Nicholas Carr tries to answer this in iGod
by taking about different companies such as Google and Microsoft plans for
the future, which is to create artificial intelligence. A term that a variety
of people are scared of or tentative about, but is interesting to learn about.
In the past couple of years there have been several advance in technology and
yet artificial intelligence is still hard to imagen having. Carr shows us in
this article that we are not as far off to making it happen as many people
think. That makes this topic relevant and engaging to the audience because he
is able to use companies that the reader knows and most likely uses every day
and talks about their future goals. Later on he even reveals dates that people
have predicted computers and people will be more connected. That definitely
appeals to younger audience, who is eager to see what is going to happen next
with technology. Although overall it was
a pretty good article I still think that he could add some information about
the effects that this advancement in technology might have on society or on
people to make it more relevant. He mentions that Bill Gates is not too keen on
the idea of making artificial intelligence, but he does not really go into
depth about why. It would have been interesting to look more at that side because
later on in the article he talks about the benefits of it. Along with going
more in to depth about what they are currently doing to create artificial instead
of talking so much about the past. It felt kind of repetitive to me at the
beginning when he talked about several different interviews where Google talked
about how their goal is to make artificial intelligence.
Wednesday, March 22, 2017
Black Hole analysis
Michael Finkel does an amazing job in “Black Holes” mainly
due to his point of view or his take on black holes. He centers his information on what the famous theoretical physicist, Albert
Einstein, thought about black holes. Finkel states in the article that although
Einstein knew that black holes where a possibility he could not imagine
the world producing such a thing.
This sort of grabs the reader’s attention because it was one of the few
things that Einstein was wrong about. Now several years later tons of scientific
facts have proven that they do in fact exist. A majority of scientists never
wanted to claim this because of Einstein’s opinion. That perspective is what
helps engage the audience to keep reading it ,while still being able to be factual and
portray all of the facts by using Huxley’s 3 directions. At the beginning, he
used Einstein as a historical reference that everyone would be able
to understand. Then he goes more personal into what it would feel like as an
outside observer to experience getting to slip into this black hole. This was
one of the most interesting parts because you could picture yourself getting
pulled into the black hole and getting ripped apart, yet it was all very
factual. I was still able to learn all of the elements that goes into producing
and getting into one of them. From this article, I took away not only a ton of
information about black holes, but different techniques I could use on my next
essay. The most important tip was probably to get the audience involved somehow whether
it be putting them into the shoes of someone experiencing whatever I am writing
about or by giving them real world examples. Either way I would probably need
to do it in a fun and factual way like when he said that some physicists called
getting ripped apart in a black hole call it getting “spaghettified”. I also really liked how he
kind of did subheadings by bolding important phrases of a paragraph, this made
it a lot easier to keep track of the article.
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