The 2016 election was one of the most controversial elections
in probably the United States history. It was a full year of negative political
ads and several articles that were made up about both candidates, which made it
difficult for some people to tell what was real or fake news. Samantha
Subramanian focuses on Veles, an 18-year-old boy from the Balkan nation that
made thousands of dollars through creating fake news. This story within itself
is pretty interesting, but since most people in the United States saw several
of these fake news articles everyday shared through Facebook or tweeted it was
able to resonate with the audience. That is what was able to give this piece a
human element because it was about something we all know about and it gave insight
to Veles life. That is similar to the documentary that we watched in class,
when they were able to talk to internet trolls. I would say this is a more
effective piece then that one because it gave us more information on the guy,
so that we could see why he decided start writing these articles. As most
people expected it was for money, but it was a little bit more then that. He
lived in an underdeveloped neighborhood with limited opportunities and when he
got the chance to get some of the material things that he otherwise would not
be able to afford he took it. This appeals to the audience’s emotions or
pathos, so that they can feel a little bit of sympathy for him. Overall that
made this an entertaining piece that I thoroughly enjoyed, along with I am sure
the majority of the class simply due to how relatable it was. Most people watch
shows or read books because they can relate to a character or the story. In
this case, it was a story that we were and are all too familiar with. Even
though the election is over just like the article said there are still
thousands or maybe even millions of fake news stories that we could find on the
internet.
Thursday, March 30, 2017
Monday, March 27, 2017
iGod analysis
In an age where almost everyone around the world has some
sort of technology in their household whether it is a phone or laptop, most
people seem to question how far it will be able to advance. Nicholas Carr tries to answer this in iGod
by taking about different companies such as Google and Microsoft plans for
the future, which is to create artificial intelligence. A term that a variety
of people are scared of or tentative about, but is interesting to learn about.
In the past couple of years there have been several advance in technology and
yet artificial intelligence is still hard to imagen having. Carr shows us in
this article that we are not as far off to making it happen as many people
think. That makes this topic relevant and engaging to the audience because he
is able to use companies that the reader knows and most likely uses every day
and talks about their future goals. Later on he even reveals dates that people
have predicted computers and people will be more connected. That definitely
appeals to younger audience, who is eager to see what is going to happen next
with technology. Although overall it was
a pretty good article I still think that he could add some information about
the effects that this advancement in technology might have on society or on
people to make it more relevant. He mentions that Bill Gates is not too keen on
the idea of making artificial intelligence, but he does not really go into
depth about why. It would have been interesting to look more at that side because
later on in the article he talks about the benefits of it. Along with going
more in to depth about what they are currently doing to create artificial instead
of talking so much about the past. It felt kind of repetitive to me at the
beginning when he talked about several different interviews where Google talked
about how their goal is to make artificial intelligence.
Wednesday, March 22, 2017
Black Hole analysis
Michael Finkel does an amazing job in “Black Holes” mainly
due to his point of view or his take on black holes. He centers his information on what the famous theoretical physicist, Albert
Einstein, thought about black holes. Finkel states in the article that although
Einstein knew that black holes where a possibility he could not imagine
the world producing such a thing.
This sort of grabs the reader’s attention because it was one of the few
things that Einstein was wrong about. Now several years later tons of scientific
facts have proven that they do in fact exist. A majority of scientists never
wanted to claim this because of Einstein’s opinion. That perspective is what
helps engage the audience to keep reading it ,while still being able to be factual and
portray all of the facts by using Huxley’s 3 directions. At the beginning, he
used Einstein as a historical reference that everyone would be able
to understand. Then he goes more personal into what it would feel like as an
outside observer to experience getting to slip into this black hole. This was
one of the most interesting parts because you could picture yourself getting
pulled into the black hole and getting ripped apart, yet it was all very
factual. I was still able to learn all of the elements that goes into producing
and getting into one of them. From this article, I took away not only a ton of
information about black holes, but different techniques I could use on my next
essay. The most important tip was probably to get the audience involved somehow whether
it be putting them into the shoes of someone experiencing whatever I am writing
about or by giving them real world examples. Either way I would probably need
to do it in a fun and factual way like when he said that some physicists called
getting ripped apart in a black hole call it getting “spaghettified”. I also really liked how he
kind of did subheadings by bolding important phrases of a paragraph, this made
it a lot easier to keep track of the article.
Tuesday, February 28, 2017
"Overly Documented Life" analysis
In A.J. Jacobs “The Overly Documented Life” he tries another
experiment, recording every day so he can look back at every moment and fact
check himself. Similar to his “Unitasker” chapter in The Guinea Pig Diaries he chose to write little headers, so he can
emphasize some of the steps to the audience. Overall used the dinner
conversation method that we talked about in class. That means that he writes
mainly informally for entertainment, adding jokes here and there to grab the
audience’s attention. While still incorporating a decent chunk of facts, so the
reader can understand the experiment better. Some examples are the google
glasses and the Bell method. That is the main method that he used to do his
experiment. After doing his experiment for a while he realized how he changed
psychologically at first, he stopped doing things like peeing in the sink
because he did not want to see the recording. Quickly he figured out that it
did not really matter and continued doing it. It was pretty interesting how he
compared that to reality TV programs. I do think a lot of those shows the
people get so used to the cameras that they start acting like themselves again.
All to go with his overall theme that life does not need to be recorded.
Although it seemed like a good idea it tends to make life more boring because
people guard themselves when they see that they are being recorded. Most times
it is better to just live in the moment and interpret events the way with think
they went. This is something that I completely agree with because I have always
felt that experiences are better than pictures and videos, even though those
can be nice too. It addresses another major issue that many people have
including himself, which is privacy. As I mentioned before many people feel
uncomfortable being recorded, when he found out that his post from his mood app
was public he was enraged. As many others were when he told them that he was
filming them.
Thursday, February 23, 2017
"Inequality: Can Social Media Resolve Social Divisions?" Inquiry or not
“Inequality: Can Social Media Resolve Social Divisons?” by
Danah Boyd illustrates how even with this new and innovative technology that we
have today, race is still a huge issue in the United States. Most people argue
that the internet connects people around the world, which gives them tools to
be more tolerant. This is not the case in today’s society people do not take
the opportunity to utilize these tools. Boyd does tons of research interviewing
various students to prove this point. That is why I think that this is an
inquiry essay, specifically an exploration. Boyd is engulfing himself into the
internet culture endlessly observing the social divisions that the youth has
made by taking notes and adding some of his own reflection. Analyzing how
Myspace and Facebook in particular has created a cultural boundary between
young people. Several people that he talked to did not even notice that there
was social division, until Boyd pointed it out by looking at the people that
they are friends with or their comments. Most of them where from people of the
same race or background as them, due to the simple fact that people hang out or
talk to people that they share things in common with. Then reflecting to
himself that the internet is not the answer to solving this longstanding
problem. People are the only thing that can fix this, because we are the ones
who make up the daily norms, so we are the only ones that can change it. It is
not enough to rely on endless amounts of information to stop racism anymore
because most people do not look at it. Instead the internet has amplified the issue by
calling people who use one website “ghetto” or “lower class” then another.
Tuesday, February 21, 2017
Map out of inquiry essay
For my inquiry essay I am, planning on doing an experiment.
For my experiment, I will wake up every day at 8:00am to go to the gym, which
should give me a little more free time during the day. Throughout the year, I
have struggled with time management. A way that I have thought about fixing
this problem is by waking up early to go to the gym, but I have always been too
lazy to do it. Now that it is an assignment I will have to do it and note how
it effects my everyday life. Hopefully it will help me have a more consistent
schedule that will help keep me on track throughout the day. Overall it is a
proven fact that exercise has millions of beneficial effects on someone’s
physical and mental health. There are also a lot of benefits to working out in
the morning. First, it enhances your metabolism by starting off your day
working out and eating. That makes your body do one of three things; it
can use it as a source of energy, it can replenish your body, or it can store
it for later. It can also form some sort of consistency, which just means that
if you go later on in the day you are more likely to be tiered or feel overwhelmed and
not go. By getting it over with in the morning you are making it a priority and will not have an excuse to not go. This is one that is super important to me because a lot of times when I
have a lot of homework or I am just tired from the school day I end up not
going. Since I am so use to doing some sort of physical activity throughout the day
that if I do not go I feel bad about myself and it is harder for me to sleep.
Another positive aspect is that it prepares your mind for the day and works
kind of like coffee for some people. Research has shown that it improves your
focus and mental abilities throughout the day. Like I said before it helps you
get longer and better sleep at night, especially if you go early in the morning
like around 7 or 8am.
"Consider the Lobster" vs "the Unitasker"
The main difference between “the Unitasker” and “Consider
the Lobster” is that one is an experiment and the other one is exploration. In “the
Unitasker” A.J. Jacobs, tried to limit the number of times that he multitasked throughout the day for a month or so, researching different methods
to help him like meditation. “Consider the Lobster” on the other hand
researched the lobster community by analyzing Main Lobster Festival, the
background of the lobster, how they cook them, some controversial issues that
people have with them, etc. All of that made “Consider the Lobster” a little
more factual and formal then “the Unitasker”, which was more of a dinner
conversation. Although Jacobs still had facts and was performing an experiment,
he tried to add more comedy then the lobster article. What they both had in
common was that the authors had to do research in order to write their article.
Jacobs researched different forms of meditation by using the Wii and reading
different books about it. Wallace, who wrote “Consider the Lobster”, researched
practically all aspects of the lobster in his article. They used different methods to get their point across due to their different audiences. “Consider the
Lobster” was written for a former magazine called the Gourmet, so its main focus was on the culinary aspect of the
lobster, describing why so many people are against eating it. “the Unitasker”
was a chapter in a collection of experiments for a book called The Guinea Pig Diaries. This was made
more for entertainment and would probably have a more youthful audience then
the lobster article. Both had a definite question and similar responses to their
question. In “the Unitasker” Jacobs was trying to see if he could go a full day
without multitasking and in “Consider the Lobster”, Wallace was trying to
answer if it is ethically okay to eat lobster since they are boiled alive. Neither
one of them got a straightforward response to their question. Jacobs never
actually went a full day without multitasking, but did learn to stop doing it
as much to enjoy the smaller things in life. Wallace, found faults in both
sides and concluded that it is too abstract of a question to respond too.
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